heres how to make an amazing c2 radar where you can see the enemies on the radar
this is something to boooooooost your game make sure you leave feed back and if you like it favorite it <img src="smileys/smiley16.gif" border="0" align="middle">
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def great! Thanks for sharing
Not really a user friendly tutorial but it's informative none-the-less.
Thanks for sharing.
what would you suggest i do talk more about it show more pics or what
thankssssss for the feed back
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ok check it out again please i think its allot better but would prefer to have someone else say that
hi yes its informative; seems like a lot of people find it useful too..
but is it user friendly?
Well for starters.
Your using paragraph spacing and bolding for your first introduction. There is a lack of capitilization at the beginning of each sentance. You using the word, "tut" not tutorial.
Some tutorial types work better with an image at the beggining that represents a final work. A Radar tutorial would suit this. Am I making a mini radar int he corner, or am I making a full screen radar. Adding this tot he description with a pic would be super usefull.
When you section off, the description paragraph should be below the headline, not before it.
layers <=== the size here is fine.
Start with need two layers with the proper paralex. <== should be below, not above.
Also add a description how the components work. While I can easily infer that radar paralax and it's meaning. You should always assume the reader knows less than you. It's easy to write with the idea taht all readers know as much as you, but then you wouldn't need the tutorial would you :D
If you need to use a showing for Event/Actions use an image. Text representations are terrible.
if a section is particulary complex. Show your image, then a step by step by step walk thru
Capitalize your sections too. It looks strange to see the guide jump from Overview, then everything else to lowercase.
thanks loads can you check it out again
thanks everybody for the advice! got another favorite and I am slowly moving up the line
That looks a lot nicer and easier to read. Has a much nicer flow.
In the initial picture, what are those objects I'm suppose to see? because what I'm seeing I would not rather than mention. But it could be just me.
quick sketches to make sure i'm not giving away my art but i can make the look a little nicer
finally i'm at 10 favorites
Just saw this for the first time today. The tutorial is really well presented, and easy to follow.
Congratulations on reaching 10 favourites, you've certainly earned it. <img src="smileys/smiley20.gif" border="0" align="middle" />