I am making an arcade style adventure game. The story will have some veiled parallels with what is happening in America with Russia, Trump, and Mueller.
Here is my intro. I'm looking for help spicing it up / making it a better read.
Any revisions are requested!
"It was a time of Division and Greed.
The Kingdom, mired in conflict, was slowly rotting away.
It was then that our Heroes decided to establish a magical stronghold to fight back the corruption.
They would seek out the other magical users of the land and band together to defeat the darkness."