I'm currently making a game for IOS called Hector the Protector. I've completed the first level. I still need to add touch controls before I can export for IOS but it runs well on PC. The demo can be played at brandonwhitton.com/hector/index.html. I would appreciate any feedback on this work in progress.
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My recommendation is to make sure all of the fonts in the beginning are the same one, and instead of doing black text on a solid color, use white. The sans serif font you're using in the controls screen is better than the serif one in the story portion.