I used RPG maker many years ago. You should really work on your mapping skills for interiors. The rooms are way to big.
There are lots of good tutorials in the RPG maker forums. Look at this one, scroll down and click on one of the spoilers to see the interior: http://www.rpg-studio.org/forum/index.php?page=Thread&threadID=40957
The graphics you use should be protected by copyright. Just saying.
Besides that - nice dialogues!
Thanks! I actually have never used RPG Maker, I just like their art. I used Tiled primarily, but I'm definitely still a work in progress there... I will check these out.
Yeah, I'm not actually sure how iffy Enterbrain is with using their resources without permission, especially in a context like this/in a non-RPG Maker project. Probably not too iffy since I saw a game using RTP RPG Maker XP assets on Xbox Live once...not sure if it's still up or not.
I actually use this free site, that is awesome, to get the assets and make all my sprite characters and animations.
As to the assets, you guys are definitely right but if you pay more and/or find the right spots, you can buy the appropriate rights.