neilgomes Much better! Now it feels creepy and dark
One more thing. I think that when your flashlight dies everything should be darker and your LOS should be shorter. Right now you see everything as clear as with the light except the monsters right? This makes it look like the monsters are invisible because all objects are still visible.
And I noticed a couple of typos. I didn't mind them but maybe you do
0:38 "Something move in there" and should be "Something is moving in there" / "Something moves in there".
0:41 "Something is not right going on here" and could instead be "Something weird/suspicious/fishy is going on here"
But otherwise it looks great.
How many different enemy types are you planning to have?