I'd Love Feedback! (Warning: Gore/Violence)

  • Warning: the following game (and therefore screens below) contains graphic violence and gore/the final game will also have a trigger warning for distressing content

    • obviously this is not going to be a game for anyone under 18.

    <font size="5">UPDATE: Hi guys, here is a much more interesting build of the game to try out, it's part of the introduction to the game - would love your feedback:</font>

    https://dl.dropbox.com/u/89174776/CGameb/index.html

    I also need feedback on performance. I had some music issues with the game that I have now fixed, but someone told me the whole game was stuttery!

    Runs at 60fps on Chrome on my computer, but my computer might be faster than your average PC.

    So here's a link to the game, its still in pre-alpha.

    INSTRUCTIONS - please read, as there are none in the game yet

    Use WSAD to move and jump, E to interact (I'm toying with having no interactive markers, so the game has more goodies)

    Again, the game isn't close to finished yet, but I need to know what the performance is like on other systems and what you think of the tone!

    LINK TO GAME (new link is not as violent, but still has adult themes):

    https://dl.dropbox.com/u/89174776/CGameb/index.html

    Sample of the music I am making for the game:

    [tube]http://youtu.be/8OHcAFeVf8c[/tube]

    <img src="http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2012/343/8/1/title_screen_art_for_indie_game__catharsis_by_awakenight-d5nhcrr.jpg" border="0">

    ^ title screen art

    <font size="4"> Warning: Gore and Violent Imagery in these videos/screens, don't click or scroll down to the screenshots if queazy!</font>

    Construct 2 Game I am working on, I always seem to start new ideas all the time, but I'll get around to finishing my other ones soon!

    This one is relatively short and has a concise, but (hopefully) interesting story - I don't want the violence to be mindless, for instance.

    I do need feedback, however, on my character and if she looks enough like a female.

    Anyway, what do you think of the game gampelay so far any advice or critique?

    Video.

    ALPHA TRAILER:

    [tube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s0rQxQik-zk[/tube]

    Concept:

    [tube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ceAfdZXRgQ4[/tube]

    [tube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Iy9rPhNqKR0[/tube]

    [tube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OZvJKoKhz3I[/tube]

    <img src="http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2013/022/1/6/screen2_by_awakenight-d5sbzda.png" border="0">

    <img src="http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2013/022/5/c/screen_3_by_awakenight-d5scem7.png" border="0">

  • Um... yes, like a female clown.

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  • Depends of what you wanted to do when you designed this *Thing* !

    • Nah , I'n just kidding :p
  • ^ Bahaha KDBmaster totally thought that wa the first mean comment on scirra.com, but it wasn't :P

    I imagine when the steam peeps come in, it might get a little less cordial, but I hope not.

  • Looks like a female character to me. Also like the sword animations you got there.

  • Updated the post to be for my game so I don't spam the threads/.

  • nice animation all round :) looking good, good luck !

  • Love the updated video; I like the different ways you can kill an enemy.

  • Love the updated video; I like the different ways you can kill an enemy.

    Thanks! I'm going to try and do 2 or 3 death animations per enemy - i've always loved snappy sword mechanics so I hope its fun for others!

  • Decided to change the title, because I think the new one reflects the game I want to make better.

  • I like it! More death animations please!!!!! Also, regarding the artwork, I think I'd enjoy it more if it looked even more pixel-arty. Add in a background, impact screen shake and slow down effects, and I'd be a pleased buyer!

    *THUMBS UP!*

  • I like it! More death animations please!!!!! Also, regarding the artwork, I think I'd enjoy it more if it looked even more pixel-arty. Add in a background, impact screen shake and slow down effects, and I'd be a pleased buyer!

    *THUMBS UP!*

    haha thanks! there is impact shake, much more noticable at 1080P youtube has awful compression :P

    if slow down is straight forward enough to do for pixel art in construct, that would work too!

    I haven't done any background art yet, but don't worry, I'm thinking parallax backgrounds and splashes of color to really enhance the visuals :)

  • It looks really good.

    The pixel violence appeals to me.

  • Looks really good. It works fine with a lot of blood particles running?

    Seems funny :P

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