Feedback for my first game

Hello!

This is the first game I develop. This is called Larry Puberty. I spent a bit more than a month to make everything: programming, audio and visual art. It is a very very simple game but I'd like to receive some feedback so that I can always keep improving my skills.

Here it goes the link: kongregate.com/games/FredericoCM/larry-puberty

Thank you!

don't know why, but my mouse dissapeared after I pressed on the towel. Great idea, have an easy option inside the game to turn off the music, since it's a web based game, usually people are listening to something else. Thats what I have so far, need to run away to school and good look, looks promising!

Thank you HeroBiX! This thing about the mouse dissapearing was proposital, but with your comment I see it would be better to put a "grabbing hand" sprite instead of nothing. I have a lot of trouble trying to create the turn on/off sound option, but I'm going to give it another try.

Thank you so much!

Well it's definitely a gross game :P

Not bad though, good level of challenge most of those kinds of games dont have, good art style and all that too!

Only thing is I feel like the hit detection could be a bit more generous, especially for a mouse based game, there were times when my cursor was just SLIGHTLY to the right or left and it didn't take it, became unfair as the game gets faster.

Thanks Dannyzigg! I'm going to change the colision area.

I am glad to know my post helped you, jonygina!

Frederico I scored 14200, I think your game needs a scoreboard, and maybe some extra actions every now and then... like bonuses, or penalties of sort. Maybe a fly comes to your face? Maybe you have to pull stuff out of your nose?

I totally agree with you Windwalker. I really enjoyed the idea of the fly. These stuff will certainly improve my game, thank you!

In the non-browser version of this game (wich I didn't publish) I put a highscore, but I couldn't "translate" this system to the API integration of Kongregate. So I had to cut it out from the browser version.