The Well

  • I've been working on this game for 6 months now and it's almost finished!

    You can check the video here:

    www(DOT)youtube(DOT)com/watch?v=T5t1Ds7Crek

    (Sry but Im still not able to post direct links ^^;)

    Any feedback would be appreciated!~ <3

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  • Some feedback:

    -Graphics are beautiful but walk cycle looks a little bit awkward. Might need to add 3 or 4 more frames in between.

    -Game looks like a puzzle platformer?

    -Music is excellent. It has that Chrono Trigger upbeat vibe

    -With a face like the character has, I didn't think "Evan Davis" was a fitting name. He looks more like a "Makoto" or a "Shinji" or something

  • wow.. cool.. a lot of work for only 6 months!

    here's the link..

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    Are you using spritefonts? if not you should.. some of the fonts you are using aren't great looking.. they look like Arial or something.. I'd make select a nice "fat" colorful font with a subtle outline color.. use BlackHornet's "Give Your Fonts Mono(spacing)"

    I agree the walk cycle could be smoother..

    good job so far.. lots of work!

  • Some feedback:

    -Graphics are beautiful but walk cycle looks a little bit awkward. Might need to add 3 or 4 more frames in between.

    -Game looks like a puzzle platformer?

    -Music is excellent. It has that Chrono Trigger upbeat vibe

    -With a face like the character has, I didn't think "Evan Davis" was a fitting name. He looks more like a "Makoto" or a "Shinji" or something

    Yes I will Make more frames into the walk cycle cause I'm so used to watching it that I don't see it weird haha but now that you mention it you're right.

    It's puzzle platform rpg aventure kind of game xD I dunno what to call it hahah! ^^;

    I compose the music myself and now that you pointed out Chrono Trigger music it does sound a bit like that <img src="{SMILIES_PATH}/icon_e_surprised.gif" alt=":o" title="Surprised" />

    I could change the name but I didn't want to give him a Japanese name. I might have to think about it.

    Thanks for you feedback tho, I appreciate it!

    wow.. cool.. a lot of work for only 6 months!

    here's the link..

    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=T5t1Ds7Crek

    Are you using spritefonts? if not you should.. some of the fonts you are using aren't great looking.. they look like Arial or something.. I'd make select a nice "fat" colorful font with a subtle outline color.. use BlackHornet's "Give Your Fonts Mono(spacing)"

    I agree the walk cycle could be smoother..

    good job so far.. lots of work!

    I'm not using spritefont. The idea didn't even cross my mind but it sounds great. I will have to check that out and see! <img src="{SMILIES_PATH}/icon_e_surprised.gif" alt=":o" title="Surprised" />

    Also thank you for your feedback!~ <3

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